I'm so sorry david! I'm here if ya need to talk...

Absolutely beautiful sad penned you potray here, well flowed expressive emotion, take care.

bert

Wow, this poem was beautiful and very expressive, very touching, i loved it

Once again, you've written a fantastic poem. I know that most of your poems are based on real life, so I'm sorry about you loss of her ~Mia

I love it..is it for katie? well its vry deep i love it and i hope who ever its for does too..i dont have time to post because today is EASTER and yestderday my man came down so yea..I have new posts abotu our big date and yeah I will post 3 or 4 lataz'..keep it up.

Lissa

Wow i love it. but is it really about katie? cuz it dont seem like it. i dont think u've well u no. i think u need to show her how u feel and give her a second chance but it does dpeend on who this poem is about.

I loved it.. Its really great. I especially loved the part: " I have bruises on my heart. I have scars on my arm. Its because of you. You gave me this harm." It really gave me chills. Great poem. Loooooved it. Keep it up ;)

I Luved Your Poem...It Holds Such Passion...I Cant Feel Your Words Till The Last Bone Of My Spine...You Just Know How To Make The Reader Feel Your Words...Your Poems Are All Breath-taking...I Love The Way You Speak Through Your Poetry...It's Like Your Poems Are A Part From You... Your Such A Great Poet And Person... You've Got Pure Talent...I Adore Your Way Of Writting And I Hope To See More Of Your Work Soon Enuf...
Take Care...
With Love,
Piink :)

Erm i no i've already commented but i just saw ur comment bout erm lolli. it kinda seems to me that well she's over him and u two are flirting loads. im sorry but i have to say wt is on my mind. and is this poem bout katie or not?

Even though were in a war of rap (lmao) no hard feelings on that.
Good job that actually describes me and my ex keep up the good work

WOW- this is a beautifully written poem- it flowed wonderfully from start to finish so its a shame it was written from pain- i don't know your situation but i hope time heals all your wounds and that you find someone who makes you happy- you are a very talented poet- Take care XxX

Great poem, and thanks for the comment. I love how this poem is kind of dark, but still about love. :)

Good job..

Kyle