It Couldn't Be...

by Sean Dohr   Apr 15, 2006


Blood drips from my veins,
like rain from the sky.
Hits the carpet like a waterfall,
sitting here, waiting to die.

I start bleeding profusely,
after one last slit.
My body starts to shiver,
my brain and heart start to quit.

I can feel the blood dripping,
not just on the floor.
It's running down my arm,
can't feel pain anymore.

My eyes close and re-open,
now I can't see.
My body is breaking down,
there is nothing left of me.

I try to stand, but I can't,
and crash down to the floor.
Now, I start to see things,
I've never seen before.

A bright light and a hand,
that is held out toward me.
I think to myself, is it God,
no way, it couldn't be...

...could it?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    An unexpected ending
    still missing that spark you light it up with.
    hmm.
    4/5
    ~Emma

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow its hard 2 find poems that i havent already r/r/c since u always do gr8 in my contests! lol anyway...wow...very emotional. 5/5
    #3

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    This topic has been covered countless times but you approach it in a original way. I thought the rhythm of this was good and it all flowed well. It was really different too when towards the end you write almost optimistically, but still with that sense of disbelief or not knowing what is happening. Nice write :)

  • 18 years ago

    by melly xx

    Wow
    that last stanza really moved me and i heard god tell me, give him a 5/5!
    and so i listened.

  • 18 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Thatz intense..great write, keep it up!
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

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