Wow!! I really loved this poem!! It seemed to be written from the heart wich always makes the best poems!! I wouldnt change a thing it was perfect!! 5/5!!

Things get better, give it time.

I liked it, havent heard anything really like it before. It's different and from the heart. Great job.:D

Wow! This is a very deep poem and i like it a lot....you are always my favorite poet!

I liked this one because it reminds me of the poems that I write. You can check them out if you want. This poems was written beautifully. My teacher is making me get off the computer so I will get the rest of yours out later. 5/5

Wow! You asked people to read your poems and I am glad you did, because your writing ability is amazing. You topic is one that has been expired beyond anything, but you used your own writer's voice to bring it to life again. I liked your explicit imagery, it really painted a picture, although it wouldn't be one I would want to see.

-Tainted

I liked the rythm alot it was sad but deep

Thatz intense..great write, keep it up!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Wow
that last stanza really moved me and i heard god tell me, give him a 5/5!
and so i listened.

This topic has been covered countless times but you approach it in a original way. I thought the rhythm of this was good and it all flowed well. It was really different too when towards the end you write almost optimistically, but still with that sense of disbelief or not knowing what is happening. Nice write :)

Wow its hard 2 find poems that i havent already r/r/c since u always do gr8 in my contests! lol anyway...wow...very emotional. 5/5
#3

An unexpected ending
still missing that spark you light it up with.
hmm.
4/5
~Emma