by Lying To Live Apr 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Painful memories |
by Kaylee
I think it's alright. It's good word choice but maybe make it more in depth. Also you might want to correct dieing to dying. You probably were typing fast. |
Omg thank you so much sumtimes i type them so fast they dont make sense ....your a legend thank you ...XoX...and yes thats exactly what i meant i shall go chnage it right now |