by Rose Apr 16, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Taking my heart as each day does allow it |
by Natalie
This was another great poem. Again with alot of raw emotion in it. I really liked it! Although in the 3rd stanza, I think it should be "Bare" Instead of "Bear". Other then that, The flow was great and the rhyming technique was good, Very easy to follow. Keep writing! =] 5/5 |