by PS Apr 16, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Milky brown on my tounge |
by Ariana
This is a neat random poem. I like your descriptions and I like how it all flows completely fluidly and I also like the rhyming even though I'm usually against it! Congrats for coming 2nd in the poetry contest :) |
When I saw the title I couldn't help but have a look at this one. The first lines made it seem so tasty...Mmm... |
by SEAN
Well written |
by Roxy
Lol i read ur other one about soda lol, chocolate and soda lol good enoth for my nicley put well done |
by Tripp
Hahah i really like this. sepia's a good word too ;-). same here, chocolates the best. the thought of chocolate makes my mouth water haha. good poem though |