by ed stewart Apr 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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Pain from the one you love |
by SAINTS MATE
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You should turn this into a song because its reali good... keep riting ey... coz this is good stuf... keep working on it ey |
by Michelle18
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Your poems are really good. they have so much emotions. |
by SADADDY
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This is a nice write, you have expressed you feelings well. Just know that what is happening between your parents is not your fault. They both love you very much. May you find the peace and joy you seek in your heart. |
by PaperHearts
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OMG its soooooooooooo gd i almost cryed :) |
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Ed i totally loved it and u should check my poem Shallow Grave. its a good one too...... |