I like it, but it frightens me.

Well done, I like the flow of the words; like a song.

Kalika

This is so sweet. I wish my father was just like this. I never really had parents who were there for me or comforting. My 5 vote goes to this poem. It's great. Good job!!

-Artimis-

Hehe that was interesting, yeah a lil scary.. but it cool.. Overall its a nice poem, well written.. Keep it up

Very good poem ..well thought out.I liked it so much I read it twice.
Tisha~

Hmmm. very interesting! nice write dear!

luv

I really like ur poem its very nice but heart breaken
love it very much
sweet but sad

Tht was poem was awsome!! wish i had a father like tht...tht was great!! Good job!!