Oh wow.
that was a surprise ending. this is beautiful. but its so sad...don't really do this! and you DO shine, trust me. that boy is not worth your time of day. one day you'll realize that.
but i still haven't realized that for myself, so why am i giving you advice when i can't even take my own? lol.
oh and i got a new poem. maybe you'll like it?
5/5
...lauren...
=)

OMG! THEY KEEP GETTING BETTER AND BETTER BUT MORE SAD EVERYTIME! MY SISTER IS THE SAME WAY! I FEEL LIKE I LIVE IN THE SHADOW! DON'T GIVE IN! IT'S OK! THE WAY YOU WRITE POETRY, YOU MUST BE BEAUTIFUL! THE BOY AGAIN DOESN'T KNOW WHAT HE'S MISSING! GOOD LUCK! DON'T GIVE UP!

x3------SHELBY