by ~*eyes of love*~ Apr 16, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Girl: If only I had the guts, to tell him how I fell. That I truly love him, and what I fell for him is real. |
by ThatPerson
VERY GOOD! =) 5/5 |
by J Lau
Excellent write! Very different style, but worked beautifully. Only comment I have is a couple of typos... 1st stanza with the girl... should read "how I feel" or "how I felt" and "what I felt". The sixth stanza from bottom with the guy... should read "If only she could tell..." and "...the only one I've felt..." Other then that, great job! Keep up the great work! 5/5 |