by cLumsy Apr 16, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
You touch my skin with yours |
by Torn
Amazing poem huni. |
by Heidi
Haven't commented for a while, sorry i haven't been on. again, your writing blows me away... pure passion through this whole piece, amazing and yet so beautiful... 5/5 most defiantly... words cannot explain |
Great poem... very touching,...5/5 |
by [ E P H I ]
You dummy. you're the only who told me to sign up on this thingy how can you not know who i am *sniff* im heartbroke. (HINT: Three musketeers and doggie?) |
by BlueDreams
Girl...for the one you love, Is like a garden flower, That must be pruned and weeded Before it yields its treasure. Years refine its grace, But only with devotion, And much imagination To freshen the familiar. But, ah! what then the freedom, That comes alone from giving, And knowing that your wishes, Will be your lover's pleasure! For in the utmost chamber, Lust is quickly sated,While love still craves redemption, Ever the lost savior. |