I really love the way you worded this poem, it has such grace and delight to it, well done.

Hey gawjuzzz this is a bootiful poem... really im not just saying that i love it :))
keep at it darlink x x x

,, cud u have a look at myn plss

Hey darl a t0uching piece beautifully w0rded. keep it up

Very touching and sensual too....
gr8 write

luv

Aww I wish u and CS the best of luck...this is such a sweet sweet beautiful poem..keep it up..ur getting better!

Lissa

Heeyy. you're over cs eh? over cs my butt woman! =P but beautiful poem as always *sniff* you make me proud! haha

WONDERFUL description, i saw the most vivid images, i truely love it
if you have the chance, please check out my poem impulse
- Words are only treasured when they are truely spoken

Girl...for the one you love, Is like a garden flower, That must be pruned and weeded Before it yields its treasure. Years refine its grace, But only with devotion, And much imagination To freshen the familiar. But, ah! what then the freedom, That comes alone from giving, And knowing that your wishes, Will be your lover's pleasure! For in the utmost chamber, Lust is quickly sated,While love still craves redemption, Ever the lost savior.

You dummy. you're the only who told me to sign up on this thingy how can you not know who i am *sniff* im heartbroke. (HINT: Three musketeers and doggie?)

Great poem... very touching,...5/5

::MELI::

Haven't commented for a while, sorry i haven't been on. again, your writing blows me away... pure passion through this whole piece, amazing and yet so beautiful... 5/5 most defiantly... words cannot explain

heidi may

Amazing poem huni.
I feelt so happy when i read this. It's just so real. There's sign of pain and hurt, but so much love. Ah i love it.
I havent heard from u in so long.
I hope that you're ok.
much love xoxo