I loved this. good job.
--aprils conspiracy

Wow this poem was so amazingg. so different. so unique. i loved it!

So I'm walking down the street
to a lonesome heartbeat,
singing softer than your silence.
Dragging with the people
of my very own broken dream,
leaving my body dancing all alone in the cold night street.

that was my favorite stanza. a perfect ending to a wonderful poem. i really like yer style of writing. it's lovely. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.