My living nightmare

by MadelineJayde   Apr 16, 2006


I know it's hard for you
but don't you think that it's hard for me too?
i try to avoid you, i just don't wanna hear your voice
but when you yell and scream at me it seems i've got no choice

i just had another screaming, sleepless night
with another day there comes another bruise to hide
well i've cohered a broken jaw
and i don't know if i could take this anymore

you can hit me i'm too far gone to care
you might knock me out of this living nightmare
and every breath i take is full of fear
with every smile there comes a tear

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Very straight forward. I like that in this poem and felt it convayed that very well.

    It is a very good poem and felt that it had the emotion that some poems lack behind it.

    Thanks for the comment on my poem, i always return the favor.

  • 18 years ago

    by beyond help

    Wow , i realyyyyyy love the poem , 5/5 for sure , oh and thatnk you for the comment on my poem , it means a lot to me

    XxXxXRaChAeLXxXxx

  • 18 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Wooow i love the last two lines =]
    thats amazing and so is yoor other
    poetry
    keep writing and keep up thegood work

    check out mine??=]
    love alice

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    "Every breath i take is full of fear, with every smile comes a tear"- great lines, just like everyone else has said
    That means its good :)
    if you have the chance, please check out my poem impulse
    - Words are only treasured when they are truely spoken

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Wow..your poems and pieces of writing are always amazing.
    "With every smile there comes a tear"
    that line is really deep,a beautiful write.

    Kat

Read All Comments (6)

More Poems By MadelineJayde