Very nice. It's so well written and so .... i dunno... it sounds very real....

ttyl,
-Suzie

A poem that seems to twist and turn as i read it. the differnt structures of the stanzas made the poem more interesting. i really liked this one

Ruby

The first thing I thought when I had finished it was 'Jesus!'
As in jesus that was so good
It was like somebody had torn my skull apart and inserted the poem then....it did feel so very real
thanks
~Moo Moo

Good job!! i think that this one is one of your best. keep up the good work! :)

Again i say its awesome you are very discriptive with you poems there written with such a beauty

I dont actually know what to say... all i know it that the poem is a bloody brilliant one! (and a very good tribute too) i particularly liked:

'I live a life introverted,
I live a life thats sad

I will still live it
I will still live it'

it sounded very noble, and then the end was so sad and sounded a bit like a sacrifice lol. very good indeed

I like this poem very much. It has a nice rythm to it. Very touching as well. Great job.

Woooow. That's pretty. 5/5
That's.... All I have to say... Yeahhh.

PurpleMonkies*

Very nice. I loved it's clarity and it's very direct. loved it.

Well planned poem, keep up the good work ^^ love the way you expressed the feelings in this poem 5/5

5/5

I love this. As I read this I completely related I mean 110%. I felt a pulsating sorrow, yet total peace with it. It flowed perfectly not like reading it, but feeling it in my heart.

"I live a life introverted,
I live a life that's sad

I will still live it
I will still live it"

I have to say, to me that is one of the most powerful statements in a poem I have seen on this site in a long time. A surrender but at the same time not completely.

Keep writing your amazing
Jenn