Vey good peice, this site isn't great for the more visual side of poetry is it? but still the content of the peice is very good and well written.

I believe i have just found my new favourite poem. The imagery in this is.... exceptional to say the least. I am almost speechless (which is a rare happening for me).
Your diction and flow were incredible. i'm really really glad you made that request for people to read this poem, if you hadn't i would most likely never have read it, and taht would be my loss in every way.

Well done and rock on
-Suzie

Wow amazing poem the imagry was beautiful
I think its good even in plain font. lol xD
Really great poem

Love it, a very sad yet calm poem. Keep it up!

*your comments make my day^-^

Wow, I Can't Believe How Good This Is, I'm Jealous Honestly That I Cant Write Like This...I Strive For This Type Of Perfection In My Writing And You Seem To Surpass The Level Of Talent I'm Use To Reading...I'm Just An Admirer 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

You're an amazing writer! I hope you know that. This was another really good poem! It's just the way you word it and express it. It's very clear and easy to understand. Wonderfull job again. I hope to read some more soon. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.