Wow, very interesting poem. Very unique and well written.

I love this, awesome message and very unique wording! Great job! :)

Wow i agree...good poem :)

Wow, what a different poem! I like the language used - it is complex and out of the ordinary. I also thought this was a very imaginative explanation for rain! (omg it just started pouring now lol) I liked the line's
'why cry when they reside in a world
where the days are intertwined
when they live in a painless paradise' Cause it's a bit different from the rset of the poem and it' s a really good description. This is a really creative write, well done. :)

Really uniqe take on the subject. I like the idea alot. The poem itself was also well done. It flowed nicely.. very easy to read.. Good work!