I love this poem. I had to read it twice just to feel it once more.

It has an incredible flow, and so much beneath the surface. It's an excellent peace. I really enjoyed reading it.

Perfect use of words. It a wonderfull write! And enjoyable read =)

Very well done

Lotsaaaaaaaa love
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Very good I love the last line "you were broken from the start" wonderful emotion, I'm glad your back that means I can look foward to more poetry from you

This poem had a very good vibe and was touching. alil sad yet very beautiful all at the same time. you have a great talent, never quit writing. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.