I like it alot...it is something that i would tell some one i care for alot. and if you dont mind i would like to give it to that person...i thought that i would ask you first...
o and your page said that you have a myspace well i do to
www.myspace.com/torris_the_bull23

You were right, it does help! It's GREAT! you are a great writter, Keep up the good work!

I love it... its so powerful and it has soo.... much meaning.... who ever you wrote that to must have meant alot to you... keep up writing songs and calling me... lol... Love ya Baby....
Brandi Dumencic

Well i liked it! it was kool!

Holy man. i have been reading through all of your poems, and i think that this is my favorite. i have read it over four times now, and it only gets better each time i read it. can you please write some more like it?

~Lissie~