The story of my life(true)RIP CARLOS

by ~MaRiAh~   Apr 16, 2006


This story is sad
Deep, but true
Of a love so rare, only came to a few

You think youve been thru
Pain, suffering, and strife
So please take a step into my life

My world became depressed
In the year 2006
My life was changed a boy I dearly miss

At 13 years old
I met the love of my life
My babii, my love, he called me his wife

Beginning of January
Was the time we met
The connection between us some did not get

Our ages were diff
We were 5 years apart
But I knew you were the one st8 from the start

I called u Mr. Grabber
The name explains it all
But half the time babi is the name I would call

Flirts and love letters
We sent to each other
Or of how we felt towards one another

One month later
U became my boo
Feb 2nd it was me and you

We grew so close
Talked all day
You were so special 2 me in everyway

You were in a gang
Latin Kings to be exact
Youve been through the rough and that is a fact

On Feb 14th
My grandmother died
I was so depressed and weak inside

On Feb 15th
You were in tha hospital
My depression became totally unbearable

I stuck by your side
The whole way through
I would neva...EVA...let down ma boo

About a week later
you finally came out
I missed you so much witout a doubt

I was starting to heal
The pain inside
The tragedies happening I could not abide

Weeks and weeks passed
We were close then ever
The relationship we had, one could not sever

On March 22nd
Something went wrong
U got shot in the chest and the pain was strong

You were loosing strength
And wrote me a letter
I prayed and prayed for you to get better

God heal Carlos,
I love him so
Please oh please dont make him go

On March 24th
What a tragic day
At 4:42 you passed away

I cry every night
I miss you like crazy
Ive been wanting u badly and needing you lately

You told me once
Before you died
You were glad that I stuck by your side

Your last words to me
I hold them close
Of all the lost ones I miss you most

I bring your letter
Everywhere I go
And try not to cry, u told me so

Carlos I love you
Youll always me by boo
Im glad to know u loved me too

I know your there
Watching down on me
My guardian angel you will be

This story is sad
Deep, but true
Of a love so rare, that only came to a few

RIP CARLOS AKA MR.GRABBER, 1/21/88 - 3/24/06

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  • 18 years ago

    by yasmine

    U MADE ME CRY ......i had 2 read it more than once ....... stay up
    !!!!!!!!

    $yazz$

  • 18 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    O.m.g. this bought tears to my eyes, i am so sorry about this lost, i really dont know what to say, except i hope your are finding ways to cope, luv n light, and all the happiness, even though it wont help, for a 13 yr old you are a amazing writer

  • Wow that was a very sad poem I really liked it aorry about him and everything.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tasha

    Wow..that made me cry!! I know how you felt. I found the boy of my dreams when i was 13 & he passed away last year in December. would of been our 3rd year together..keep writting ur really good..keep ur head up high!