Reallly good poem!

Oh wow Lauren..that's sad! but it's soo good! && i really need advice now! some stuff happened today that isn't good at all....but anyways. 5/5 all the way!

... Great poem, definatly shows emotion... 5/5

I loved this poem.. even though it didnt rhyme it is still one of my favorites.. you showed excellent emotion in it 5/5 keep it up

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*