A Whiter Shade of Pale

by Jacklyn   Apr 16, 2006


Looking upon the pale horizon
where my fingertips once rested
beautiful curves, yet so innocent
with a soft and smooth surface

My soul which was once restless
learned of peace within passion
Striped of masks and all clothing
blankets of body heat from another

My midnight hands danced upon her
As two tongues collided, becoming one
no disturbances, only natures music
two bodies tangled desiring more

Her pale hands find comfort upon me
A new day breaks across the horizon
a sun shines on her pale beauty
My restless soul has found its peace

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    "My midnight hands danced upon her
    As two tongues collided, becoming one"

    Wow, I love those lines!!!! This is such an outstanding piece. Your careful choice of words brought this piece to life in such a magical way.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Very deserving winner jacklyn, well done to you, this is a wonderful poem, lol the title makes me sing the song every time I read it! Like I said brilliant poem, the third stanza was fantastic! well done once again! Sorry I haven't checked up on your work much recently, I am glad I have found the time to!

  • 18 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Congratulations on winning the challenge for this title!

    Great work!

    Thank you so much for participating!

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