Twenty - One

by Eibutsina   Apr 17, 2006


I guess you could say I am happy with my life
Of years this was my twenty-first
Twenty-one long years of being me
In my complexity since birth.

This year was indeed a long one
With land marks quick and fast
So many good times and such laughter
I wish I could have made it last.

My family I miss you so much
Ever since I moved away from home
But I've moved onto bigger and better things
Now that I am older and I have grown.

I'm with my man my better half
Who has made my life complete
I love him so much I packed up and moved
My heart knows we were destined to meet.

The little one is growing just as fast
He's learning and changing everyday
His vocabulary is expanding rapidly
He has got so much he wants to say.

I have also lost some old friends
But I have in turn made plenty anew
The joy and times we've shared so far
Makes we wonder what I used to do.

My career progression has slowly built
I find myself dedicated, and working so hard
But I have so many inspired brilliant ideas
I really need to focus so they can start.

All in all I have had an absolute ball
This year a muck was certainly run
I look back in these pages of memories
And smile when I think of twenty-one.

** My poem that actually started my scrapbook which has all the pictures and special moments of my twenty first year I wrote this last year but just havent had time to post **

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  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    OMG! I soooo wrote you a poem for your twenty first last year!!!! I never posted it either how weird!!! I'll have to dig it up n send it to you

    Told ya I'd be first to comment! So I really really loved this poem...actually brought a tear to my eye picturing me being twenty one and writing a poem like this
    I am enormously proud of you EIrisa for changing some of your old ways and really like your poem said moving on to bigger and better things...makes me smile! It also makes me think of when i turn twenty-one whether I keep my word to my parents and not go out and drink or have my own fun party with no drinking cause you know thats the big age...ahhh what to do..but so far away!
    This was worth the wait Eirisa, an emotional piece for me..any poem that makes me think of my future gets me to tears!
    Always your biggest fan,
    Lil titta