My Final Act

by Mitch   Apr 17, 2006


Today's the day
Tonight's the night
When I'll finally lose
This hopless fight
I undress slowly
Turn on the shower
Maddened with grief
In my final hour
To my loved ones
This is my last goodbye
I'll be out of my misery
So for me
Please don't cry
And with this blade
I'll open my arm
And commit this
Final act of self harm

© Mitch 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by A thousand broken hearts carried by a thousand broken wings

    Hey I like this one to but this is my fave. Im a cutter and I realized today that cutting dosent prevent the problem you in it only makes it worse.
    Keep it up!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dani

    Aww! that was so good and really well written. uve deffinately got talent! keep up the amazing work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by **..Shell..//

    I like your poems, ive commented on all of them so far, i like the style that u write in, dnt let nyone tel u its nt gd, cuz there rong.be gd to talk sumtime, ur in my favourites so ill keep cheacking bak .. keep it up.xxshellxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awww, This is so sad. I really hope you don't feel like this. *hugs*

    It was a great poem though. So short, But filled with so much emotion, I honestly loved it! Keep it up! 5/5

    luv natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written peice, it is short and too the point really capturing the reader thoughout

    5/5

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