Razor blade kisses

by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX   Apr 17, 2006


Now that your gone
All i can do is sit in
a corner and stare at the
wall.

The pain is so much ill take a razor blade kiss just slide that tiny little blade across my skin. Am i going insane are you the one to blame?

What did i do to make you go away maybe i should beg you one more time please come back please stay.

So ill kiss the razor it feels so good yet hurts so bad can u see the blood its so red should i be doing this i don't really care.

Just pull up my sleeve then you will see the razor blade kisses I'm so obsessed with the thought of you it wont go away I'm so caught up in a web of lies.

I'm like a little fly just trying to survive i cant get out I'm so weak.But i love you so much.
Why wont you help me?

You said you loved me that you wouldn't ever leave but now i just lie in my bed as my sheets turn red it burns from the razor blade kisses But just let me be ill be OK.

Besides i already know your just gonna leave me here to bleed and watch me die while you walk away.

So before i die ill have one more razor blade kiss and as soon as i stop breathing and my heart stops beating the pain will go away and you cant hurt me no more.

Cause the razor blade kisses have saved me thats more than you've gave me.

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  • 15 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Again you need to organize your poems better.They really are great poems but the structure just isn't there.Ttry setting them up into stanzas of 4 lines.Great work though.5/5

    -Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    Wow that was really emotional. My only question is why is it in the Love category? Shouldn't it be in the Sadness/Depression cat? But then again, it could work in both, so I'll just shutup now. lol Really good, I loved it! I lost someone very close to me and I did become depressed, so this poem really described the emotions that I went through, too. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow this poem was really freat, i was so drawn into it. keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Aww hunn I hope you don't do that to yourself. I used to when everything was just too much to handle. My mom was diagnosed with MS, my grades were slipping, I was depressed.. and that was my escape. I think this poem's structure could use a little help, but I thought it was really good otherwise. Great job, keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I can definietly relate to this in ways that I wish I couldn't. Cutting is a common topic for poems though. This was good and you could feel all the emotion, but it just wasn't unique. I think maybe you could use the same words and maybe put it in a better structure. It looks more like an essay right now. Don't get me wrong though I really did like it, it's just some ways maybe you could improve it. It's your poem though so if you don't like my suggestions just ignore them! It's great as it is!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

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