Wow!! So much emotion and passion was put into this poem!! But you don't have to cut yourself to make the pain go away...and you DEFINATELY don't have to kill yourself!! Someday, someone is going to sweep you off your feet and you'll be happy again! And yes...there are times in life when you WILL get hurt...i know how it feels...but all you can do is try to get through each day at a time! Take it slow...because it's very hard...but there WILL be a tomorrow and the sun WILL shine on your broken heart...You have to get through this...you just HAVE to!! I'll even help you if you want...i used to feel the SAME way...lost and alone...feeling like that's the only thing you can do!! But believe me...it's a big mistake. People in this world love you and care about you...and they don't want you to waste your life on this person. So remember that every new day brings joy and hope for another one to come...There will always be hope...there will ALWAYS be people who love you out there. Just remember that ok? SMILE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Another great one. i have a question. who are you talking about going away in this poem? Also another very emotionl poem and very painful but you know that you don't have to cut yourself to make the pain go away. I'm sure there is some one out there who cares about you. Don't give up.

This poem is good. I agree with the other comments though, but I also think that unless they actually know you they shouldn't decide what you should feel like you want to do or what you do. But the truth is any guy/girl that makes you cry or hurt is never going to be close to being worth it and the one who IS worth it would NEVER put you much pain and make you cry. 5/5.

My favorite so far.

<3Amber

WOW! this poem really ... spoke 2 me in a scense it really got my attencion!

I can definietly relate to this in ways that I wish I couldn't. Cutting is a common topic for poems though. This was good and you could feel all the emotion, but it just wasn't unique. I think maybe you could use the same words and maybe put it in a better structure. It looks more like an essay right now. Don't get me wrong though I really did like it, it's just some ways maybe you could improve it. It's your poem though so if you don't like my suggestions just ignore them! It's great as it is!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Aww hunn I hope you don't do that to yourself. I used to when everything was just too much to handle. My mom was diagnosed with MS, my grades were slipping, I was depressed.. and that was my escape. I think this poem's structure could use a little help, but I thought it was really good otherwise. Great job, keep up the good work.

Wow this poem was really freat, i was so drawn into it. keep up the good work

Wow that was really emotional. My only question is why is it in the Love category? Shouldn't it be in the Sadness/Depression cat? But then again, it could work in both, so I'll just shutup now. lol Really good, I loved it! I lost someone very close to me and I did become depressed, so this poem really described the emotions that I went through, too. 5/5

Again you need to organize your poems better.They really are great poems but the structure just isn't there.Ttry setting them up into stanzas of 4 lines.Great work though.5/5

-Amber