Is this the end??

by Miss Pipp   Apr 17, 2006


The world is dying
going corrupt
people killing daily
will the world blow up?

the lucky country
not so lucky anymore
soldiers off here and there
keeping 'peace' between the poor

save us from our doom
this fate we will endure
we bought it upon ourselves
about that i am sure

people crying
make no amends
everyones dying
is this the end??

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  • 17 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Wow that was a great poem, I really like it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    Very nice poem i really liked it
    5/5
    love linda

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I believe it is the end excellent write babe great meaning and flow 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Driver

    Great write. i like the question ending leaving the reader guessing more. written well too. great job.
    Driver

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Pip --
    This was great! The rhyming and flow in this poem was amazing, and the theme was definitely well thought out. It was attention grasping, and I really enjoyed reading it throughout the whole thing. Great Job. 5/5

    Samantha Hollywood

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