Very good

An excellent poem, Ben. Great use of atmospheric terms and effective language. You've done well. Good job =)

Much love and God bless,
Fallen.

Beautiful job, Ben. You used your words well, but as a tip, you should use punctuation at the ends of your lines, sometimes I get confused if the line after the previous is meant to go with it, or if it's completely different. Great work nonetheless, not your best, but it's pretty good. £> lovelove.

Take care,
- -SJG

I loved it. it is so beautiful(tear)