by master of shadow Apr 17, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
The sun creeps over the horizon |
Beautiful write. nice job. i love it! keep it up bub! |
by Daniel J
Nice poem. The only thing I can think of, by way of a critique on this poem, is the misplaced letter in "makes the world seems new." |
by Mona
I loved the title, so I had to check it out! |