Aw, This is sad. I can relate to it alot though. It was a great poem, Could have maybe made it a little longer, And gone a little deeper. But it was still good the way it is. Great job! =] 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Sad, yet very well done, =) your a fanominal poet, I hope you keep it up Andy =)

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Jenn aka Disappearing Act =)

Great peice, well written wth a good flow. the length is short yet it easly contains as much as some of the longer poems upon this site.

5/5

This is good...i like the flow. 5/5

I try and write work like this, short but strong enough to carry through pages.
Let me just say your talent is amazing If I haven't mentioned it before.

This was good. The ending really brought the poem together! Awesome job! 5/5

`taleee xx

Its good, and i liked it. But it ended abruptively and that made it seem less well flowed, but it was good.
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