Song of a Ticking Bomb (About to Explode)

**this was uber hard to write... I put different lines from different songs together and tried to make them in to a love poem... please rate & comment for advice... thanks**

You are my only one,
I'll haunt you everyday,
Your looking back at me,
And these things I'll never say.
You see right through me,
I'm frozen inside;
Saying I Love You,
Is what you say with just one eye.
I dream to hear you,
On a lonely night;
Times flies so slow,
On this da~mn cold night.
Everyday is so wonderful,
In my lover's arms,
I can see it in your eyes,
It's the deliverance of my heart.
To find myself again,
Two quarters and a heart down,
Who knows the better side of you?...
When I've known this all along.