Comments : My Fairy

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    HEHE... so, angel is taking a break..and now, fairy is working hard.. HEHE

    Great poem... your love poems always take me to another world.. it feels so peaceful, silent... thanks for sharing these lovely pieces..

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Wow! its wonderful Nitin!
    ur love poems are awesome....i wonder u r d same person i knew in starting! well keep writing such poems...i love reading them....always 5/5

    luv,
    Bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Love the imagination, it paints the perfect picture. Beautifully written with full of love. All the best to you and your fairy. :-)

    Love
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee Kotva

    This was really pretty I'm glad things are going better for you, well it sounds like they are; I hope they stay that way.
    god bless
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    God bless u for this poem its truely very wonderfully imagined.5/5

    sonam

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    This is great how u have pieced this poem together great wording and imagination, has a nice flow and ends beautifully, wonderful work eos xox me

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey this was really g0od. very t0uching piece. great j0b 0n this!!

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    This is a really good poem, i love teh way you rite
    plz check out my poem impulse

  • Thats very nice. and i love it even more because it was written on my annivarsasry...lol. thanks a lot for your comment and yes that is true. I only write what i feel and nothing more. great job anyway...5/5.

    Diana

  • 18 years ago

    by rar

    This is a very good poem. love how u write it, very detailed. good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Awwwwww that was soooooooo sweeeet!!!
    OMG I'm Totally amazed!!!!!!! I really adored ur poem its sooo emotional and fantasticly written!! absolutely 5/5!!
    keep it up hun
    Luv
    NemO XxXxXxXxXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Samantha~

    WoW! u have talent...It was beautiful...I so loved it...SAMANTHA

  • 18 years ago

    by Unbreakable

    Wow...that is beyond great. Bravo.

  • 18 years ago

    by alex

    Omg that was so good

  • 18 years ago

    by katrina porter

    This is a very good poem def. 5/5

    JENNA

  • 18 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ................lovely............
    and so charmingly romantic

    and, thank You........

  • 18 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    Love the ending

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was like one of the most beautiful poems I have ever had the pleasure of reading! Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    I had to comment on this one again...since it has been awhile since I had read it...Still holds the beauty I saw in your words the first time I read this beautiful poem.

    lay down while resting your ears on my heart
    and feel the love which in your eyes i could see
    fly high with these wings of love while i create
    a tale to be remembered forever of me and my fairy
    coming from the mountains full of shining stars
    and the waterfalls which with you i see so clearly

    so walk with me...

    Breath taking.
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    I love this piece Rachel picked for your feature writers week. I fell in love with it when I first read it. It reads like a fairytale :)

    won't you come out of your lonely shell
    and on these roses of love, walk with me
    allow my shoulder to comfort your head
    while i try to make your soul so carefree
    wrap your hands around my waist
    for that's how i imagined my journey to be
    lay down while resting your ears on my heart
    and feel the love which in your eyes i could see
    fly high with these wings of love while i create
    a tale to be remembered forever of me and my fairy
    coming from the mountains full of shining stars
    and the waterfalls which with you i see so clearly

    so walk with me...

    I could read this over and over and never get tired of it.
    ~Bravo~
    Love Cindy