Comments : The Story of a Broken Smile

  • 18 years ago

    by Depressed_Without_Reason

    That is a really good poem. Thanks for the comment on my poem. I added you yo my favorites to let u no.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jade Angel

    That is such an amazing poem!!!!i seriously had tears in my eyes...keep on writing:)

  • 18 years ago

    by stephanie

    That was such a kute but sad poem! you are a very talented writer, so keep writing! and thanks for your comment on my eternity! =]

  • 18 years ago

    by lisa

    Girl thats very very good! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by LiL K

    Wow, you have really great talent, especially for being 14! I remember that's when I started writing.....anyway, this is an absolutely wonderful poem, but I'm sorry you've already had to experience the pain of a broken heart. Broken hearts never fully heal, but you'll find your "real" prince charming someday, trust me.

    Thanks for your touching comment on my poem "I Miss You"...I really enjoyed it and it started my day off in a positive way. I appreciate your time and energy you used to r/r/c!

    And yeah, like I said...this is an AmAzInG poem! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey, this is again an amazing write, i could seriously sense a talent in u and u hv diff ways of writing too, really glad to go thro ur poems.

    this one was sad but then thats what life is all abt

    take care and all the best
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulCutter

    OMG i absolutley love this poem, i give you a 2 thumbs up! :)