Yeah, a little sloppy, I know. spell check wasn't working, and it wouldnt submit it, no matter how many times i clicked it. So i hit submit once more, and left, and when i came back it had sent it in...so yeah. but please comment ;-)

I liked it but the ending didnt sum it up with a pow!, i dont thikn it did it justice, as this is one of my favories of urs....grrt plot and i like ther knife part.....
love ya lots,
sore

WOW (speechless)

Lissa

Love ur poem very much thats the best one i read all day

Excellent poem!

"I'm invincible now,
Nothing can harm me
without my friends, and my life
I wouldn't be me"

I loved your reassurance in those lines. This one is probably my favorite of yours so far, asides from your newest, but for some reason I just can't find the perfect words to describe how much I liked it. Keep it up though! 5/5