by Sole Apr 17, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
A signal, a sign |
by Tara Kay
Its good, i tried to sing it and it seemed to flow well, even with my lousy voice, its good. well done |
by Jon Hunt
Wow i can just imagine this as a song, sometimes i like to write songs, theres more freedom, more that you can do with words and pronounciation. |
by Sarah Ann
Great poem! I loved it, it flowed nicely, I think I even got a perfect rhythm for it. I think it would sound even ten times better than this perfection when it is sung. Keep it up! 5/5 |
Great peice, very strong and consistant rhythum thoughout and very clear content. bet it will sound brilliant when put to music. |
by LuvMeAlwayz
Cool poem, moreover a song... gota hav a tune for this, it's cool |