Wowsee there goes the ol' poem genius again...u better have a tune for this song

Cool poem, moreover a song... gota hav a tune for this, it's cool

Great peice, very strong and consistant rhythum thoughout and very clear content. bet it will sound brilliant when put to music.

5/5

Great poem! I loved it, it flowed nicely, I think I even got a perfect rhythm for it. I think it would sound even ten times better than this perfection when it is sung. Keep it up! 5/5

Wow i can just imagine this as a song, sometimes i like to write songs, theres more freedom, more that you can do with words and pronounciation.

Great song, i hope you have music for it too!!

Jon
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Its good, i tried to sing it and it seemed to flow well, even with my lousy voice, its good. well done