I shed the blocker,
force a hole, as simple as opening a locker

and

an open field,
the opponents might as well yield

seem unproportioned. like the second like is too longish.

youve got some nice lines in here, like the lance bit and dense blood. nice job

It was nice to hav all ur sports in one simple poem...im not good at judging these b/c i dont rlly like reading about sports, but overall good....
love ya lots,
sore

Different....and i can tell u love ur sports..good poem.

Lissa

Heh. Wow - this poem, if a little shallow, relates to me quite a bit, I have a friend exactly like you - she's very competitive, and it's hard to beat her at basketball - or any track. She's amazing at football too. :)

Peace. [Sole]