Graffiti

by Raychel   Apr 17, 2006


Graffiti on the wall,
Tells a story of us all,
But it's not only written in paint,
Our blood tells that we have no shame.

Etched but marks we all have to deal,
You have no feelings;you can't feel,
Life has slipped away from us all; it has no meaning,
But it's not only my life that you're stealing.

The wall's explaining,
It shows our pain,
We still don't know right from wrong,
But our once weak selves are growing strong.

Now all of us will take a blade,
We're going to share our stories today.
Our fingers covered in blood are signing our names,
Now my bloody, painful story has some fame.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Gd

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    It's a great poem but watch the rhyme in some lines. Don't limit you words. 5/5
    -Kakashi

  • 18 years ago

    by Iflookscouldkill

    I sorry but I don't like to to put wounds on my skin that I'll later on regret okay and yes im am very perky and im proud of itand im not saying that i don't have problems okay cuz i do but not so extreme that i would try to kill myself i just build a flippin bridge and get over it cuz im a teenager okayand if your one of those girls that cry over losing a boyfriend then i feel sorry for u i really mean it cuz guys will come and go but other than that get over yourself and don't talk to me if you think im to perky cuz im not i just perfere to be happy.

  • 18 years ago

    by bleed4eternity

    Ok so i thought this poem was really creative, i love how you found a way to make such a common subject (cuting) and turned it to be unique
    well done well done

  • 18 years ago

    by pain is me

    I love love love this
    its creepy in a real way
    good job
    xxxx

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