That was amazing and the plot was awesome! keep writing b/c i loved it.... i wish i could write like you....
love ya lots,
sore

Gr8 poem...u got talint. keep writing:)

I love love love this
its creepy in a real way
good job
xxxx

Ok so i thought this poem was really creative, i love how you found a way to make such a common subject (cuting) and turned it to be unique
well done well done

I sorry but I don't like to to put wounds on my skin that I'll later on regret okay and yes im am very perky and im proud of itand im not saying that i don't have problems okay cuz i do but not so extreme that i would try to kill myself i just build a flippin bridge and get over it cuz im a teenager okayand if your one of those girls that cry over losing a boyfriend then i feel sorry for u i really mean it cuz guys will come and go but other than that get over yourself and don't talk to me if you think im to perky cuz im not i just perfere to be happy.

It's a great poem but watch the rhyme in some lines. Don't limit you words. 5/5
-Kakashi

Gd