Warped reality

by ShadowDancer   Apr 17, 2006


An immense maze of mirrors
Nothing is as it seems
Hide in your warped reality
No one can hear your screams

Wipe away your silver tears
It is no use to cry
Swallow back childhood dreams
As your heart begins to die

Claw at the rocky walls
Until your fingers bleed
Scream until your throat cracks
There is no-one here to heed

Blind yourself in ignorance
Laugh into insanity
There is no escaping this
Your warped reality

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Great poem! Every line is so powerful and the vocan is wonderful. The rhyme and flow were pretty spectacular as well. Flawless write

    marcella

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. this is an amazing poem.. idk know how to explain.. its short but just so strong.. like i feel sad and the pain in the poem.. its just a really great strong poem.. it gets the message out.. your a really great writer.. keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    This poem was really amazing. I really liked it, and I thought that it had a great story and great images and I enhoyed reading it a lot. 5/5

    Ravyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    I enjoyed the dark atmosphere, the desperate fight to get out and in the end there's no one to blame but yourself. This was a create dark poem that portrayed one of the less beautiful truths about life!

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Very nicely written. I loved it. I thought the flow was great and it was very nicely exicuted. :D

    And no worries. I will finish the other 8 poems, later. I have to go. =)

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