Emense poem, i love it. just a bombardment of messages.

I LOVE IT! it's short but it somehow manages to create such a strong feeling of sadness inside me. it just feels powerful, great poem =)

Oooh, very nice : ) and so beautiful in every regard. Somehow the imagery is just that little but more amazing wiht every poem you write. Rock on, my friend. Rock on : )
-Suzie
xox

Wow its really deep n dark but very good i like it lots
xxxxx
emma
xxxxx

Blind yourself in ignorance
Laugh into insanity
There is no escaping this
Your warped reality

The last stanza was indeed, the very best. But the others were excellent too. Very well written, very deep, and the strong, powerful and horrid imagery of somebody trying to climb a cliff, with their fingers bleeding was great.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow gr8 work, scary yet awesum:). 5/5 for sure!
~*Who Cares?*~

Wow really good!! kinda scary in a sense...but really good!!

Really great work. ... I absolutly loved this one,.. the flow was amazing, and great word usage.!!!

"wallow back childhood dreams"

LOVE THAT LINE :)

Very nicely written. I loved it. I thought the flow was great and it was very nicely exicuted. :D

And no worries. I will finish the other 8 poems, later. I have to go. =)

I enjoyed the dark atmosphere, the desperate fight to get out and in the end there's no one to blame but yourself. This was a create dark poem that portrayed one of the less beautiful truths about life!

This poem was really amazing. I really liked it, and I thought that it had a great story and great images and I enhoyed reading it a lot. 5/5

Ravyn

Wow.. this is an amazing poem.. idk know how to explain.. its short but just so strong.. like i feel sad and the pain in the poem.. its just a really great strong poem.. it gets the message out.. your a really great writer.. keep it up!

Great poem! Every line is so powerful and the vocan is wonderful. The rhyme and flow were pretty spectacular as well. Flawless write

marcella