Your......gone

by perfectlyBROKEN   Apr 18, 2006


It was like it was yesterday were laughing
but now no more
you were there for me whenever i needed you
and i thank you for being a councillor in my time of need
you really were a friend in deed
***i know they say life is unfair...but they never said it was this cruel***

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  • 17 years ago

    by more den just a broken smile

    Brill poem i feel ur emotions great work nd thanks 4 d comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess

    Again i can related love it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    *hugs*
    Life can be so so cruel.
    I'm sorry for your loss
    But your poems are like a light in the dark
    So keep on writing!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by *Beautiful Disaster*

    Hey.. really good poem.. sorry for your loss.. i lost my older sister about two yearse ago.. its realyl hard.. i also have a twin and i dont know what i would do without her.. your poems are awesome
    Beautiful Disasterxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey thanx 4 commenting on my poems
    im so sorry about ur twin Missy, i have a twin, Stephand i dont know what id do if i lost her even thought i h8 her sum times
    your poems are really great and have so much meaning in them
    keep strong mel

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