Wow, Kaylee! That was really good. Everytime I read your poetry, They get better and better each time. I have high hopes that you will become a writer one day. And if you do. I hope you know I'll be first in line to by your book =] But back to this poem, I thought everything about it was wonderfull, It was just perfect. Not a thing I would Change. 5/5

luv natalie x-x

P.s When you get a new poem, Just tell me. And I will comment on it since you only wanted one this time. x-x

Fantastic peice good flow and brilliant content, the use of imegry and descriptions though.

5/5

Kaylee, your poetry astounds me. The emotions a person feels and the things that go through one's mind when they read this are unexplainably
amazing. You've created a masterpiece.

Wow.. i really really love this poem.. i gave you a 5/5. very powerful

thanks for sharing
shannon

It was good. An undertone kept the flow smooth and the words fit with this piece. The imagery was great and well it was overall good.
~Faith

This poem was so sad! But you wrote it very beautiful, its very descriptive. Great job! 5/5* keep up the good work!

Erm. I am actually stumped for words. What is there to say - that poem was . . . perfect! I'm going to go and sulk now . . . how could anyone comptete with that??

Peace. [Sole]

Amazing.

Reading newspaper stories
never pour dread into my
body as they used to.
I’ve been toppled over
with emotions, fear spilling
from life’s champagne glass.

i love that line. the imagery you use is fantatic. um the flow is great. great job!

Awesome!

I liked it and it was wrote in a different style then I usually read. I think that it had a really cool style to it. You are really talented. Keep up the good work and always do your best. 5/5

This is awsome! cool style...5/5

This is an excellent poem thought it was wonderful and full of emotion

That was a sad poem yes, but sad tails of just as much right to be told as the happy ones do. However sad poems don't have the happily ever after that the human soul craves keeping so many people away from there. Here's the thing though, in the sad tails we can find comfort and understand with a complete stranger who has shared a burden similar to our own, who as also had cause to grieve and morn life. That is what this poem as done for me. A brilliant write, as so many of yours are.

-Tainted Mikochan

A very good poem, with such emotion and pain. the reader could feel the pain by reading it and thats wut makes it a good poem

Awesome! I like your work alot, you are so talented, keep it up
xxxx

I really like your writing
Good Luck in Life

Wow
you have a good talent, i loved it.

That was awsome i realy felt it when i waas readin

Sexy peom

Some great images and descriptions in this.
I feel this is similar format to the other poem of yours that I have just read. I like that format, the single line at the end works well.
I felt quite a bit of emotion too when reading. I could feel the desperate aching, longing and sadness.

Well written, keep it up.