I like this poem it is so true that depression does to you...GOOD JOB!!!

Hey, You poems are so good. theres so deep....i think you should keep writing poems, your very good at them, and i like how you word your work...

Great Job!

WOW just...wow
So many different images, like your mind was pouring onot paper...impressive
So many different takes on being lonely and sad, hurt by the World
I know how yu feel with the 1st line, with so many people...ugh...
Great poetry once again

This poem brought tears to my eyes. Great job.

"Picking faded papers
from the road, one leading
me from my past to the present.
Still seeing that child longing inside of me,
just waiting for somebody to hold her."

I know the feeling. I really do.
Good job hunn..*

I don't think i can explain how this poem made me feel. Beautiful job, very powerful and touching. I have tears in my eyes. Each stanza was breath-taking and you almost felt like you knew who 'the forgotten witness' was. i love how you ended this. take care
JL

Great poem, keep writing more

Your poems can be hard to take in, because the language used is so sophisticated. however, i can not see what you could honestly do about this, as the words make the poem'

Ruby

Another wonderful poem! i get the feel that you really enjoy writing and that makes your poetry even more enjoyable to read, fantastic. beatiful descriptions and a great use of language xx