What are those dates for at the bottom? I have a guess but I wasn't sure. This was a passionate poem about being lost and empty without those you love. I can relate to it, but perhaps not in the same way you meant it. Still, either way, 5/5

-Tainted Mikochan

This is heartbreaking, but shows so much strength at the same time.. So beautifully written..
"move along,
just stare right through me."
^^^ This line said so much, it really spoke to me..
"I can't see, so delusional and naive,
I keep holding on
to what I want to believe."
^^^ I can ever relate to your words here...
Amazingly written, I love the repeat of move along, quite intriguing..

Gary, your poems touch me in such a profound way, it's hard to explain. Moving on is so hard to do, but alas something we all have to face through life's journey. Take care ... and know that someone is thinking of you.

Wow, this is amazing.. and very touching.. It almost seems as if it can be a song as well. It's great, and thank you for the comment on my poem, it means a lot. 5/5

Gary,
This is so hauntingly beautiful and sad. I can't wait to move along through all your posted poems and read each one. Take care. Debbie

Gary it is like your words were written for me. So much of how I feel are in this poem. You are so talented. God has given you a special gift. Words can touch the heart more than anything. Words can also heal the heart. It is when we share these words we begin to heal our souls. Great write!

This is a very good poem. When I read it I can feel the emotions that this poem brings to people.. Very good..

Wow another amazing poem!
what can i say; your words really touch my heart and take my breath away. i haven't seen talent like this in a while..
your poems are beyond exceptional.

in this one, i especailly loved this stanza:
"I fade away when you are gone,
I don't exist when you're not here,
I am only alive when you are near."

but overall it's a great poem! and i don't think these words even do it justice..
keep up the great work!
--Viola