I'm sorry to hear about your loss.
I have read your poem and it shows your emotion and confusion as you are trying to take in the news. You have carried this across really well. Keep writing your poetry as it really helped me to express my thoughts without breaking down and giving in. Stay strong
Jade x

This is very touching. If this is a true story please tell me about it. If not, you have a great imagination.

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