This is a great poem, i enjoyed reading it ;)

Great!!! ty for the comment, plz comment more and i'll do the same

This is a really good poem i like it a lot, youre good

Your last stanza really made me think. I love the way you ended with such a powerful thought, that its not that you want to die its just that nobody notices that anything is wrong. Sometimes you'd think that your best friends or the person who knows the real you could tell if something was really wrong. What I've realized in my own life is that sometimes you have to give them a hint! People can be real stupid sometimes... Keep writing, you're not alone!... really...