Did u right that?!
*Crystal*

Wow, i especially loved the ending "like a rose in cold december" it was very powerful and soooo beautiful.
Thanks for commenting on "truth Divine". it means so much.
-Suzie

This is simply incredible. Truly amazing. You wrote this? You're already a better writer than me. *smiles* Everything ties together so perfectly. Awesome job!

This is such a great poem.. and i relate to it well 5/5
xoxoBrOkEn-HeArTeDxoxo

Now its my turn to be speechless!
thank you for the comments its much appreciated
awesome poem XD
LOve
~Em

Hey its really good. i like it a whole lot. thanx for commenting me. i dont get alot so it means alot to me. keep writing cause so far im likeing everything.
xo skye xo

Wow..that is such an amazing idea!!

well done!

keep writing!!

thanks for my comments

xxxxx

Wow! 5/5

I really like this poem.. and its really sad cus there is no hope for a rose in decamber... but hey thanks for the comment.... its nice to know that people listen when you show your soul...

The last stanza really tied it all up
very well written
and definetly deserves a 5/5

Great one here! really loved this part...

"A soul that has no light;
A mind that has no dreams.
Her appearance isn't everything;
Is she really what she seems?"

and also loved the very last line!!!

"Filled with hate and darkness;
Burning from the cold,
Hurt from all the words
Stories that everyone has told"

^^ I loved this line and you stanza altogether. It was a very emotional poem, sad and deep. I enjoyed reading it.

You have much insight, No matter how beautiful we are , it doesn`t insure happiness, a lot of young people think that it does, they think you are so lucky,but no one knows what goes on behind closed doors. another great poem.