Love like this

by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ   Apr 18, 2006


Our love is magical, nothing can compare
your the only one i want, love like this is rare
Every time I'm with you, i just cant get enough
I know i will always be with you, even if things get rough

Everything about you makes my heart melt
This is the most feelings that i have ever felt
I'm so glad we found each other, i would die without you
I wish you could see how great you are, through my point of view

Your smile is so perfect, it makes me want to cry
I can trust you with any secret, for you can never lie
Your more then i could ever ask for, your more then i deserve
Every time you touch me you mess with every nerve

I wrote this to tell you i love you once more
I don't want to hide it like before

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  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    "Everything about you makes my heart melt
    This is the most feelings that i have ever felt"

    J'adore this bit...hehe...this was a wonderful love poem it wasnt as lustful as some of the ones you read. It was delicate and the little grammar slip felt like a real dialect coming through which made it even cuter. Well written and good use of rhyme.

    [lost_laureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Really cute, nice work

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Aww... how cute!

    i hope your aunt gets better...

    thnx for the comment :) i hope u have a great day ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana

    Wow! I never knew you were this good....great job!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Perfect, sweet, loving, empotional. I love this poem, congrats, you came 1st in my contest
    xxxxxx

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