Comments : Love like this

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Perfect, sweet, loving, empotional. I love this poem, congrats, you came 1st in my contest
    xxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana

    Wow! I never knew you were this good....great job!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Aww... how cute!

    i hope your aunt gets better...

    thnx for the comment :) i hope u have a great day ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Really cute, nice work

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    "Everything about you makes my heart melt
    This is the most feelings that i have ever felt"

    J'adore this bit...hehe...this was a wonderful love poem it wasnt as lustful as some of the ones you read. It was delicate and the little grammar slip felt like a real dialect coming through which made it even cuter. Well written and good use of rhyme.

    [lost_laureate - come find me]